“The Neutral Zone”
Written by Deborah McIntyre & Mona Glee and Maurice Hurley
Directed by James L. Conway
Season 1, Episode 25
Production episode 40271-126
Original air date: May 16, 1988
Stardate: 41903.2
Captain’s Log: Captain Picard has been summoned to a conference, so the Enterprise is hanging out. They find a capsule from late-20th-century Earth that has drifted and will fall to pieces soon. Since they’re waiting around for Picard in any case, Data asks to beam over to investigate it further. He and Worf beam over to discover that a) it’s inexplicably got atmosphere and gravity even though the former is unlikely to have lasted this long and the latter would be impossible with the tech of the time and b) it’s filled with capsules containing cryogenically preserved humans. Only three are still alive, the others either having had their seals broken or empty.
Picard returns and orders the ship to go to the Neutral Zone, warp eight. Two Federation outposts along the Neutral Zone have been destroyed. The assumption is the Romulans are responsible, though the Federation has heard almost nothing from them since the Tomed Incident 53 years, seven months, and 18 days earlier (according to Data).
Crusher, meanwhile, awakens the people in the cryo chambers. They all paid to have their bodies frozen upon death so that they could be revived in some future when what killed them was no longer fatal. They include Clare Raymond, a housewife, “Sonny” Clemonds, a musician, and Ralph Offenhouse, a financier. Clare is confused—the procedure was, it turns out, paid for by her husband—while Ralph wanted to continue living, and Sonny took a flyer on it, figuring it beat giving money to his ex-wives.
Data says that the cyronics fad died out by the early 21st century. Ralph and Clare have trouble accepting the reality, while Sonny just rolls with it—trying to score drugs from Crusher and looking to party with Data. (Once a musician .)
The Enterprise arrives at the Neutral Zone. The outposts have been destroyed, with no evidence of conventional weapons. Worf says that it is as if some great force has scooped it off the planet. The other outposts have similar damage.
A Romulan ship decloaks. It turns out that Romulan outposts along the Neutral Zone have been destroyed in exactly the same manner. They have no more clue who the responsible party is than the Federation. Picard proposes a sharing of information with the Romulans, to which the Romulans very reluctantly agree.
The Enterprise sends the 20th-century trio home on the Charleston, and set off for the next season.
Thank You, Counselor Obvious: Troi provides a profile of the Romulans that Picard finds useful, and she also helps Clare trace her family tree.
If I Only Had a Brain…: Clemonds takes a shine to Data and tries to get him to go partying with him, and even offers for him to be his sideman for his new, revived career.
There is No Honor in Being Pummeled: Worf’s antipathy for the Romulans comes to the fore here, as he tells everyone on the bridge that the Romulans were responsible for the Khitomer Massacre that killed his parents.
Welcome Aboard: Gracie Harrison, Peter Mark Richman, and the always-delightful Leon Rippy do quite well as the time-displaced humans. Marc Alaimo returns, this time as the Romulan commander, and his distinctive voice makes Tebok quite menacing—ditto Anthony James as his second.
I Believe I Said That: “You and me can find us a couple of low-mileage pit woffies and help them build a memory.”
Sonny trying to convince Data to paint the town red.
Trivial Matters: Sonny asks if the Braves are “still findin’ ways to lose,” which made sense when the episode was written, but would not have made any sense coming from someone in the 1990s, since the Atlanta Braves won their division throughout the decade, including a World Series victory in 1995, and have remained a top team in the National League to the present day.
Obviously, the late 20th century came and went with no cryonics fad. And the world is probably a better place for it.
While the Romulans were mentioned in “Angel One” and “Heart of Glory,” this is the first time we’ve seen them on TNG.
The destruction of the outposts would be followed up on in “Q Who” in the second season.
Ralph Offenhouse would return in the novels, Debtor’s Planet by W.R. Thompson, as the Federation ambassador to the Ferengi Alliance, and then later in the Destiny trilogy by David Mack and my own A Singular Destiny as the Secretary of Commerce for the Federation under President Nan Bacco.
Clare Raymond would return as a counselor for the Department of Temporal Investigations, helping time-displaced people adjust to a new era in Department of Temporal Investigations: Watching the Clock by Christopher L. Bennett.
Greg Cox had pre-cryo appearances by Ralph, Clare, and Sonny in his two-volume The Eugenics Wars: The Rise and Fall of Khan Noonien Singh, which takes place in the late 20th century.
The Tomed Incident was dramatized in the Lost Era novel Serpents Among the Ruins by David R. George III. Despite Data’s statement that there’d been no contact with the Romulans since that incident, there were a few, most notably the attack on the Enterprise-C shown in “Yesterday’s Enterprise.”
Make it So: “We are back.” An episode that desperately wants to be a menacing return of an old foe at the same time it desperately wants to be a humorous fish-out-of-water tale, and doesn’t work in either regard. It’s fun to see the Romulans come back, especially as played by Alaimo and James, but they’re mostly just sitting there in an episode that tries to echo “Balance of Terror,” but which has none of that episode’s snap. Worse, the smug moralizing with regard to the three 20th century refugees is laid on a bit too thick. Plus, of course, watching the episode now when all its predictions about the rise of the cryogenics fad ten years in the future turned out not to be true 15 years ago in reality makes the episode look silly.
And ultimately nothing actually happens. It’s all setup, the payoff of which was scotched by the writer’s strike, finally haphazardly followed up on in one line of dialogue in the second season’s “Q Who.” Indeed, the writers strike of 1988 results in a lot of the issues with the last few episodes of this season (many of which could have been fixed with rewrites that weren’t possible) and affected the second season as well (shortened to 22 episodes and starting late).
Thus the first season ends, not with a bang, but with a whimper. Next week, we start off the second season with “The Child.”
Warp factor rating: 4.
Keith R.A. DeCandido‘s Star Trek fiction includes a dramatization of the Khitomer Massacre Worf mentions in this episode in his novel The Lost Era: The Art of the Impossible. His more recent novels are Unicorn Precinct, SCPD: The Case of the Claw, and the upcoming Guilt in Innocence, part of the Scattered Earth shared-world science fiction series. Go to Keith’s web site, which is a gateway to his blog, Facebook, and Twitter.
If nothing else, this episode showed the mind-blowing new direction that Romulan spaceship design went… I just love these Romulan ships to pieces. There is prodiction art that shows that they are much larger than Enterprise class vessels, but the disparity was never made clear on the show.
Ah, the Romulans.
“The outposts have been destroyed, with no evidence of conventional weapons. Worf says that it is as if some great force has scooped it off the planet. The other outposts have similar damage.”
“Scooped off the planet” sounds familiar, and it’s interesting that this episode was followed up in “Q Who?” Do we know the extent to which the creative staff had conceived/developed the Borg at this point in the series’ evolution?
I happen to remember enjoying this episode, if nothing else for the comic contrast in the characters from our time. And while I’m not devoted to the “we are back” line, I liked the chilly “you leave us alone and maybe we’ll leave you alone” diplomacy.
Clearly, the freezing process affected Sonny’s memory of baseball. And, just as clearly, the “cryonics fad” was not public knowledge at the time, per the terms of Walt Disney’s will establishing a global cover-up of the nascent freezing industry. Q.E.D.
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Haven’t read the DTI novel, but I have to say, the idea of bringing Clare back as a temporal investigator is a stroke of genius. Ditto putting Offenhouse in contact with the Ferengi — at least, people in the future he can relate to!
I never did care for this episode itself, though. Yes, the Romulans’ return is cool; but it never really “pays off” (except as indirect set up for the Borg — and I’ve read somewhere that even that was happy happenstance, that the Borg really hadn’t been developed fully by the end of season 1).
One of the things that I dislike about the episode is how blasé (and kind of dickish) Picard acts towards the displacees. I know the personality aspect wasn’t quite developed yet, but for a man that has an intense love for archaeology, he looked like he couldn’tve cared less about getting to speak with an historical primary source, much less 3 of them with different specialties (Offenhouse with his Business knowledge, Redmond with her Home life knowledge, and Clemons with his Pop Culture/High Society experience). Sure, a Starfleet Earth Historian may have been more interested, but Picard treats them like a nuisance almost the entire time. I know, he had the Romulans on his mind, but it just felt out of character. I guess that such is the foreknowledge of what his character ended up becoming, that we see the growing pains of the character devolpment here.
It’s also a shame that Sonny has never reappeared again in any of the novels. Seemed like he was the one most apt to roll with the punches and adapt to the future. Sure, his personality as a lothario may have been a bit contentious in the Federation, but it seemed like he was mostly talk (in the episode). I’d like to see where he went: did he go back to making music on backwater alien planets and scoring the local drugs, or instead realize that he could still be an artist and not have to poison his body along with it.
Clare’s storyline in DTI is very well done (Kudos to you, Christopher, when you come here to comment) and I had no idea that Offenhouse was the SecCom for Bacco’s Administration, which makes a great deal of sense, as that would be where he’s the most useful.
As for the Romulans, being a fan of Trek Costuming, it is interesting to note that this is one of the only times that we see their uniforms styled like this. The sash that they wear over the shoulder is a direct holdover from TOS, and by their next appearance evolves into the belt harness we’ve come to recognize. Tebok also is very menacing, but man, for all the buildup they were SO under utilized. Alaimo as a Romulan? Who DOESN’T want to see more of that?! I wonder if he’s come back in anything that’s worth reading…
JYHASH: AFAIK, the only time Tebok was used is in a cameo in the Vulcan’s Soul trilogy. I could be wrong about that, though.
And it was obvious that Picard’s dismissal of the three humans was directly related to the fact that he’d just been asked to deal with a situation that could very well lead to war. Archaeology is his hobby, but being a starship captain is his job, and it was a rather important job right at that moment. Yes, this is Jean-Luc Picard the archaeology buff, but it’s also Captain Picard who castigated himself for self-indulgence just a few episodes ago in “We’ll Always Have Paris.” In the right time and place, you’re right, he would’ve been curious about their experiences, but that was very very very very much not the right time or place.
—Keith R.A. DeCandido
Isnt this the episode where Data has to explain how to use the bathroom to the thawed out trio… something about using the three triangles? – It was the first(and maybe only) time we heard about it I think.. (now I will have to go back and rewatch since its been a while)
@6: You’re not confusing that with Demolition Man’s “three seashells” are you? :)
Neuralnet: No such scene appears anywhere in this episode.
—Keith R.A. DeCandido
Wow, I cant believe I would get Star Trek and Demolition man confused – LOL – Guess it has beeen too long since I have seen these trek episodes
The most frustrating thing about the “Let’s all roll our eyes at the silly primitives” episodes is that whenever the Enterprise crew meets a life form that’s more advanced in some way than them, the result 99% of the time isn’t “Hmmm, we too have much to learn” but “HAW! You only -think- you’re more advanced! We’ve got HEART and GUT LEVEL SMARTS!”
Kind of a mixed message.
So-called “primitive” people often had a lot more going on than we can understand from our modern perspective, so any judgements of them should be done with care.
And some decades from now, the things we see as advanced and enlightened will seem utterly mad and ridiculous. The Federation only rarely seemed to remember that.